As Mott believes, “ there is nothing greater importance to the well-being of society at large—of man as well as women—than the true and proper position of a women” (Mott 1). This confession is a clear indication that Mott wants there to be equality between men and women.
Example 2
One statement stuck out when Steinem stated when she asked about her future. She emphasizes, “if we want a world in which you can tell jokes and get massages and have sex and dress however you fucking well please, then we have to create a form of activism that reflects that, and have fun while we’re doing it”(Steinem 3). For Mott's era, this is too bold of a statement if Mott would have said this. The most observant critic would not be fine with hearing a woman of the 19th century saying this.Works Cited
Mott, Lucretia. “Discourse on Woman.” Votes for Women: Selections from the National
American Woman Suffrage Association Collection, 1848-1921. American Memory. 17
Dec.1849.<http://memory.loc.gov/cgi-bin/query/r?ammem/nawbib:@field(NUMBER+@band(rbnawsa+n2748)):>.
Gorney, Cynthia. "Gloria." Mother Jones. N.p., Nov/Dec. 1995. Web.
<http://motherjones.com/politics/1995/11/gloria>.
For the first example the quote seems to be worded funny might want to double check that. For both examples I do not believe you need to include the author's name in the in text citation just the page number. In general I feel that your integrated sources are well put together.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job in following the format of including integrating sources. Also I liked the quote you used in your second example because it was interesting and a good way to show the differences between women of the different centuries. It would also be interesting to see what would had Mott said if asked that same question.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the second example. It shows a good contrast in the two documents that you have.
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