Going into the conference I thought my proposal was well thought out because I followed the blog where he explained everything. Also, I had good points and ideas to help my argument for my research project. The ideas I got from talking to Dr. Archibald in my conference was to first narrow down my topic again. My topic overall is Women’s Issues and I was originally going to talk about women’s rights with Business, how they are still not equal in that area. In the conference, Dr. Archibald told me to narrow it down to one industry. After we thought about certain occupations I could consider as my new topic, I chose women as CEOs. I got a lot of new ideas to work with, which are salary of CEOs, the position (why can’t women be in charge, why do people think they can’t), and ideas about what women would bring that is different to men in that same position. I plan to do more research about this topic and find some more ideas before I start the paper. Also, I am excited to find out more about the position of being a CEO and argue why women can be in charge for this occupation.
I am surprised to see that it was even possible for you to narrow your topic down more. However It still looks as if you will still have plenty of information to cover in your research paper. I think you are very well organized and ready to write a great paper.
ReplyDeleteI think you chose a great topic to narrow down your woman's issue because even though there are a lot of woman issues going on in the world but focusing on CEOs is something that is very relevant in our American society. Hopefully you will find a lot of good information on that topic.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you narrowed your topic down even more after meeting with Dr. Archibald. I think it will be interesting to see what you find when you research further into your topic.
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